Could someone check my translation of this song please?

http://russmus.net/song/11494 [russmus.net]


The Steel springs are waiting,
The mysterious forest is silent,
Planes without skies will die,
And we will rot without flight attendants,

Lets hope, that we have remained in the hands of
The Baseball bat of fate
I rely on my own risk, and your fear,
I'm starting to storm through the emptiness

Planes without skies will die,
And we will rot without flight attendants,
I will not surrender, I love the sky
I have an interest in it

Iron birds will die
flooded will longing sky captains
Planes cannot sing us*
It will be sad without flight attendants

All around the silence, I am silent because of the chains
Angels are assembled, although I did not ask
I will justify, of course, my own risk and your fear
And finally call, but I didn't phone

Planes without skies will die,
And we will rot without flight attendants,
I will not surrender, I love the sky
I have an interest in it


*Sing us, like sing songs

Edited jammers (June 1, 2011 05:51:57)

jammers
Could someone check my translation of this song please?

http://russmus.net/song/11494 [russmus.net]


The Steel springs are waiting,
The mysterious forest is silent,
Planes without skies will die,
And we will rot without flight attendants,

Lets hope, that we have remained in the hands of
The Baseball bat of fate

Let's hope that the baseball bat of Fate
Has remained in our hands

I rely on my own risk, and your fear,
I'm starting to storm through the emptiness

Planes without skies will die,
And we will rot without flight attendants,
I will not surrender, I love the sky
I have an interest in it

Iron birds will die

flooded will longing sky captains

Sky Captains are flooding the longing <- I think what they mean is that the captains drink because of the longing, aka flooding it

Planes cannot sing us*

Planes cannot sing to us <- more correct, no?

It will be sad without flight attendants

All around the silence, I am silent because of the chains

I hold the silence in chains

Angels are assembled, although I did not ask
I will justify, of course, my own risk and your fear

And finally call, but I didn't phone

And I will finally call, I haven't called in a while

Planes without skies will die,
And we will rot without flight attendants,

It will be sad without fly attendants <- this one line changes at the end of the song

I will not surrender, I love the sky
I have an interest in it


*Sing us, like sing songs

Cataloged. Thanks Kat!